Sunday, April 22, 2012

A[ I ] Love Haiku..

Crimson rose
Hands stretch out for you
Still lasts long

One who is in true love will always be there for his/her partner. Be it in their early days or when they grow old.
Like a rose, it lasts forever and both start preserving it- may be in the middle of their diaries or may be in their bottom of hearts!

This Haiku is written for The Heights Of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is Still.
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18 comments:

  1. Mohini PuranikApril 22, 2012 at 12:06 AM

    Yes it's so true, in diaries and in hearts...

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  2. Ramesh SoodApril 22, 2012 at 12:26 AM

    How very beautiful..haiku..loved the emotions here..

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  3. PranitaApril 22, 2012 at 12:35 AM

    Simply beautiful...! A very finespun Haiku... :)

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  4. debuApril 22, 2012 at 1:03 AM

    JD rocks here

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  5. carol l mckennaApril 22, 2012 at 2:59 AM

    romantic haiku ~ lovely ^_^ ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  6. GraceApril 22, 2012 at 3:06 AM

    beautiful words of love...

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  7. CYNOSUREApril 22, 2012 at 2:22 PM

    that was amazing... :)

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  8. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺April 22, 2012 at 2:49 PM

    Beautiful haiku.....I had a doubt how Still lasts long...when I only saw haiku....but your explanation killed my doubt :)

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  9. ChèvrefeuilleApril 23, 2012 at 12:11 AM

    Well done, nicely composed haiku.

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  10. Jaideep RaoApril 25, 2012 at 9:57 AM

    My pleasure :). Thank you!

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